Tuesday 15 November 2022

IELTs writing example

I'm practicing for an IELTs exam so that I can register as a provisional psychologist. Here is my take on Writing Task #2 on deforestation... 

Question:

Urbanization has resulted in deforestation and the endangerment of numerous animal species. Governments are being urged by environmental organisations to conserve these species. What advantages come from safeguarding animals? What steps can governments take to safeguard animals?


Answer:

It is estimated that 40-50% of the world’s forests have already been lost to deforestation. Often it is driven by the need to satisfy housing needs as people migrate from rural areas to the cities in masses, however, this essay will argue that it has wide-ranging negative impacts on the native habitat.

The best way to protect endangered species is to protect the habitat where they live. Forests provide shelter and a source of food for many animals. Deforestation disrupts the natural habitat of these animals, and forces them to migrate to areas that are still intact. However, such areas have been shrinking in recent years, pushing some species into forests which cannot satisfy their needs, thereby bringing them close to extinction. In fact, there are already several species around the world that are near extinction. If a group of animals ceases to exist it creates a gap in the food chain. It can then endanger the lives of those animals which rely on this food source to begin with.

Governments have a responsibility to safeguard biodiversity. They can do so by introducing stricter laws, for example outlawing deforestation. They can also work with scientists and environmentalists in creating wildlife corridors to ensure animals can continue to have a safe passage between human structures and development. Furthermore, governments can provide education to their citizens about the importance of preserving forests and protecting the native animals which live there.

In conclusion, governments have a significant responsibility in protecting endangered species and biodiversity. This starts with ensuring that forests are protected.